Dee! This is amazing. You have made leaps and bounds lately in your work, that are so fun to watch. I love the movement and the spirit of this piece.
I think you captured Pippi and her friends, so well. I love how the piece sweeps to the right, leading the reader onward. =
The only thing that got a little lost for me, were the dolphins at the bottom. I might make them a bit darker, or the sky a bit lighter, so that they pop a little more. They are just so cute, I wouldn't want to miss them!
Dee, you continue to surprise me, when I see your assignment postings, they just keep getting better and better! This is a fantastic cover image. There's a lot of detail and characters that intiruge me as a reader making me want to look inside and read what it's all about. Bravo!
I think this works well as a wraparound cover for, say a chapter book, even though you have it here as a horizontal picture book, yes? I think the type might need ti be beefed up for a picutre book cover, maybe in a different color. It looks a little lost, but doesn't matter,the illustration is very strong. I agree with frizz about the dolphins, maybe you don't even need them... although it's kinda nice that they blend in a little so they don't distract from Pippi.
Lovely work, i really look forward to seeing what you come up with on your next assignment!
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Dee! This is amazing. You have made leaps and bounds lately in your work, that are so fun to watch. I love the movement and the spirit of this piece.
I think you captured Pippi and her friends, so well. I love how the piece sweeps to the right, leading the reader onward. =
The only thing that got a little lost for me, were the dolphins at the bottom. I might make them a bit darker, or the sky a bit lighter, so that they pop a little more. They are just so cute, I wouldn't want to miss them!
Great job!
I love how you have her leg tangled in the rope - ha!!
The wrap around concept was tackled wonderfully.
Great job!
Dee, you continue to surprise me, when I see your assignment postings, they just keep getting better and better! This is a fantastic cover image. There's a lot of detail and characters that intiruge me as a reader making me want to look inside and read what it's all about. Bravo!
I think this works well as a wraparound cover for, say a chapter book, even though you have it here as a horizontal picture book, yes? I think the type might need ti be beefed up for a picutre book cover, maybe in a different color. It looks a little lost, but doesn't matter,the illustration is very strong. I agree with frizz about the dolphins, maybe you don't even need them... although it's kinda nice that they blend in a little so they don't distract from Pippi.
Lovely work, i really look forward to seeing what you come up with on your next assignment!
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