Sunday, January 27, 2008

African Folktale: Clever Hare

I thought it would be a bonus this week to post this as an I-Fri entry as well as for the assignment we post every month here at the Soup. I used a completely different technique this time around. I used acrylics of course, but started with a dark under-painting and layered the colors. This have me a sketchy, loose border. It was fun, and definitely something I'll be playing with more in the future. (I placed the text underneath the corresponding pictures.)

"Hare looked out over his field. If he was going to have food to eat, he would have to plant a crop. But if he was going to plant a crop, he'd have to clear the field first. That was a lot of work — more work than Hare wanted to do.

Hare was a clever animal, so he soon had an idea. He dragged a length of rope behind him and lay in wait in the bushes outside his field. A big African elephant came lumbering along. Hare bet the elephant he could beat him in a tug-of-war. The large elephant laughed at the idea, coming as it did from such a small animal. He scooped up the rope with his trunk. Hare picked up the other end and scampered through the bushes and across his field. There he hid behind another row of bushes."

(The rest of the tale: "Soon enough a muddy hippopotamus waddled by. Hare dared the hippo to beat him in a tug-of-war. The proud hippo picked up the rope with his teeth. Hare hopped into the bushes and gave the rope a tug. When the elephant and the hippo felt the rope move, they each pulled hard. The powerful animals dragged the rope, back and forth, back and forth, until night fell. Each time the rope moved, it plowed another row in clever Hare's field.")

**I've taken Leeza's suggestion and expanded this story into a dummy book. Click here for a look at it.**

4 Comments:

Blogger LEEZY said...

Remarkable illustrations Dee and I love the tale! Good job. I especially like the way you integrated the African textiles into their outfits --- v.cool. As I said over at your pippi posting, you continue to amaze me with your work each time you post. I think you deserve the "Most Evolved and improved Illustrator" award. Your images and visuals get stronger, like you are really owning your work. Well done!!!!

These two pieces are great. the first one has a fabulous composition, great for text placement, and I LOVE this color palette. Your illos have a splendid Follktale look about them, but without being old-fashioned looking. These have a nice 'edge.'

The second one is fun, too. Great expression on nelly - lol:) I thought it might be a fun exercise for you, if you ever feel like it, to change up the point of View. I wonder what it would look like if the view of the reader was from down low over Hare's shoulder looking up under the might shadow of the elephant to really gain the experience of the enormity of contrast between the two characters.

Dee, I wanted to see more from this tale, it's so groovy! Why don't you turn it into a dummy for your portfolio, or create at least one or two more scenes. I wanted to see the elephant and hippo playing tug of war!

It's obvious you had fun working on this, it shows - excellent job!

January 28, 2008 10:12 AM  
Blogger potatomamma said...

Nice new technique, Dee! I've always wanted to play with this dark-to-light-painting too, you're inspiring me to remember to try it one day!

I like the warm colors you use, they're harmonious. The cartoony touch of the characters is modern and cute. It's kind of neat how you use rather flat patterns, this reminds me of illustrations done on the computer – but you made your own style, and just implemented the thought. Nice modern touch.

The elephant looks hilarious! I'm sure kids would love the face he makes :-)

The rabbit in the first image has an interesting head shape. It looks good, don't get me wrong! But the shape made me think at first that it's showing his face from left, front, and right at the same time, as if it's frantically looking from left to right. I suppose that wasn't the intention, but it was funny nonetheless, and I guess it would fit. I would maybe make it a little clearer which was your intended look: straight forward, or 3 directions.

As far as the composition goes, it could be an idea to emphasize the vastness of the field by moving up the horizon in the first image. Something that always slightly disconcerts me in compositions is when something is very near a certain line, but not totally. In this instance the horizon is near the middle of the page, but not quite on the middle. To take away that visual tension, I'd recommend to move it either exactly on the middle height, or up to emphasize the field's largeness.

Expression of the characters: it's cool, Dee, how you got such a strong impression out of such few lines! Neat, and funny looks!

January 28, 2008 8:44 PM  
Blogger Dee said...

Thanks you two! You make me blush with your enthusiasm. :)

Leeza, I took your suggestion and expanded this into a dummy. It still needs some work, but it was definitely a great exercise. So many things to think about...wonderful suggestion.

Astrid- I agree about the angle of the head and the horizon line in the first scene. I think I've fixed them in the dummy.

January 30, 2008 4:28 PM  
Blogger johanna said...

Dee, this is great! I took a peak at your site as well, and I'm so impressed with your dummy! The dedication that it takes to hash that out is admirable, bravo..

The colors and the simplicity of this style are really stunning. This work has a really unique and definitive style that suits you really well. I can't wait to see more! MOre! MORE! You are on a roll!!

February 3, 2008 11:00 PM  

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